Mohammad Alher
Professor Jeff
English 113A
29 Oct. 2013
Burj Khalifa ( Creative architecture )
Creative
architecture is a creative, innovative and unique approach in architectural
designs that result in the construction of artificial structures that distinctively
stand out from the usual. These structures include bridges, buildings, and
roads among others, and even though they come out as normal structures, architects
can twist their designs to separate them from other similar structures. The
twist may be in the form of appearance, composition, method of construction or
even the technology that will be used in their construction. Most structures
that come to exist as a result of creative architecture more often than not
have to incorporate new technology. This main reason for this is that there new
ideas may not be done before architects come up with ways in which their
designs will be practically implemented. This only means that new technology
will have to be invented to support the emergence of new ideas. Sometimes this
technology is only used in the construction of one design since it may not
really be applicable in other designs due to its sophistication. This essay will discuss the creative form of architecture that was used to create the Burj
Khalifa building in the United Arab Emirates in order to appreciate the
importance of creativity when practicing architecture.
There
are many reasons that call for the need of creative architecture. One is the
location that the structure has to be put up or constructed. There may be
barriers or certain limitations that hinder the normal construction of a building ,for example, physical barriers
like mountains and water bodies, vulnerability to earthquakes, unstable weather
conditions etc. Architects have come up with creative designs that will make it
possible to construct these structures in such difficult circumstances.
Creative
architecture also poses a challenge to the people who actually execute the
design. From structural engineers to the quantity surveyors, they all face the
challenge of implanting the uniqueness of the architectural designs. Quite
often creative architecture presents these professionals with a new idea that
they have never worked on before and thus the creativity is also transferred
from the architect all the way to the foremen. Thus creativity comes off as an
overall necessity.
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There isn't a clear thesis in this essay. I didn't really understand the flow of the essay so you might want to work on your transitioning. You might want to focus more on explaining what makes this building so awesome by adding in what social values it has, if its popular and why its popular. If you write more details you will not only expand your essay but it would be better for your audience to read! its a great start :)
ReplyDeleteHe had a good title about burj Khalifa, in addition, he write good introduction with thesis statement.
ReplyDeleteYou have to add some sources for your essay and information about your topic.
concentrate on social value.
you had good job for beginning.
I think you have to clarify your thesis statement and make it better but you got a good introduction with exigency.
ReplyDeleteI think you have to add some sources to make your essay detailed.
I see perfect general information about Burj Khalifa.
You chose a creativeness topic about Burj Khalifa.
I dont think i got your thesis. the essay is about burj khalifia which is interesting. i think you should talk more about the building and the hotel inisde it
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